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【观粮】与江城冬竹朋友一席谈

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【观粮】与江城冬竹朋友一席谈

江城冬竹发表于 2015-7-1 22:51
观粮先生您好！陋作粗糙，开头收尾拖沓了，该凝炼一点。

江城冬竹：
   您能用一条小小的纱巾，折射反映一幅社会变革、人心向善的画面，已经是独具慧眼了。
   您能在背丝扣老师和其他读者朋友的品味中，自我剖析、觉察出作品的弱项，这一点更是可贵。
   仅从以上两点，可以断定，您的创作戏路，会宽广起来。
题外话——
责任目标→吃苦耐劳→勇于担当+本属于人类的小小的正经智慧→声誉或名誉在一定范围渐高，
是带有连贯性的，做文学搞科学做生意，等等等等，前几项缺任何一环，即难以企及辉煌之巅！

                                                               ~~牧野大地天仙真人空名君观粮与君共勉

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